tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7002339762787405137.post264101870717410205..comments2023-05-19T01:16:10.095-07:00Comments on Sarah Laughs: InchesUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7002339762787405137.post-28792778629294451572015-03-08T08:15:11.373-07:002015-03-08T08:15:11.373-07:00That's a lot crammed into 136 words -- like th...That's a lot crammed into 136 words -- like the narrator let out a little more than they intended. Katherine Hajerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08270232675026751342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7002339762787405137.post-85813298394593002482015-03-06T08:19:38.609-08:002015-03-06T08:19:38.609-08:00Nice twist in the story. The build up worked well ...Nice twist in the story. The build up worked well too. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13096021087395266714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7002339762787405137.post-35828883699827365202015-03-01T05:08:41.794-08:002015-03-01T05:08:41.794-08:00Hi again Ally. The impact of this story inspired m...Hi again Ally. The impact of this story inspired me to write something on a similar theme, which I have entitled "Widening the gap". And if you have no objection I shall be posting it for next week's Friday flash.<br />I hope you don't mind me taking your concept and putting my own stamp to it. I shall of course accredit the original idea, and my inspiration to your own story.<br />Welcome to Friday flash. :) Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7002339762787405137.post-43637495053419546372015-02-28T06:52:05.402-08:002015-02-28T06:52:05.402-08:00Nice one, Ally! I liked the feeling of "movin...Nice one, Ally! I liked the feeling of "moving on" until you crushed it with that ending. :)Chuck Allenhttp://www.chuckallen.usnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7002339762787405137.post-56574816255130159062015-02-27T23:54:39.520-08:002015-02-27T23:54:39.520-08:00Thankyou Tim :)Thankyou Tim :)Ally https://www.blogger.com/profile/09610944444538562368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7002339762787405137.post-9643826415645461622015-02-27T23:54:21.033-08:002015-02-27T23:54:21.033-08:00Thankyou Steve :)Thankyou Steve :)Ally https://www.blogger.com/profile/09610944444538562368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7002339762787405137.post-78549940715081506672015-02-27T23:53:56.537-08:002015-02-27T23:53:56.537-08:00Thankyou Donald :)Thankyou Donald :)Ally https://www.blogger.com/profile/09610944444538562368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7002339762787405137.post-26232778829704344572015-02-27T22:24:06.154-08:002015-02-27T22:24:06.154-08:00A very nicely done twist. Many an undercurrent th...A very nicely done twist. Many an undercurrent there.D. Paul Angelhttp://dpaulangel.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7002339762787405137.post-72550166338652602112015-02-27T08:44:05.449-08:002015-02-27T08:44:05.449-08:00Yikes! I didn't expect that ending.
Welcome t...Yikes! I didn't expect that ending.<br /><br />Welcome to Friday Flash.Tim VanSant Writeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17614259042362664840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7002339762787405137.post-66834258877367409102015-02-27T06:31:20.092-08:002015-02-27T06:31:20.092-08:00The whole piece is in itself quite chilling, and e...The whole piece is in itself quite chilling, and excellently done in such a low word count.<br /><br />I do shudder to think what they had suffered in their childhood too.Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7002339762787405137.post-75660591373753710462015-02-27T05:18:05.593-08:002015-02-27T05:18:05.593-08:00Wow, that last line is a gut-punch.Wow, that last line is a gut-punch.Donald Conradhttps://flashtold.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7002339762787405137.post-10429739856414460522015-02-27T03:58:04.164-08:002015-02-27T03:58:04.164-08:00Thank You :) Friday Flash looks great.Thank You :) Friday Flash looks great.Ally https://www.blogger.com/profile/09610944444538562368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7002339762787405137.post-51260396717009702322015-02-27T03:41:53.355-08:002015-02-27T03:41:53.355-08:00Whoa, that last sentence was chilling. I'm afr...Whoa, that last sentence was chilling. I'm afraid to wonder what he did. <br /><br />Very well written! Welcome to Friday Flash!Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.com