Monday, 10 March 2014

The Last Word










            Park bench memorials are everywhere



            these days



            but this bitch was quick I'll give her that much








            To my dead husband


           Rot in Hell you Bastard



           Bob 

          February 2014 



       


          That told him then.








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This was written for this week's Trifextra challenge over at Trifecta.


33 words are needed but they must include a word or a phrase that is a palindrome.


Why not have a go and say hi to some lovely writers.












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33 comments:

  1. Shailaja V10 March 2014 at 08:39

    Lot of angst eh?

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    1. Ally 10 March 2014 at 09:33

      I guess whatever he did, he should have treated her better :)

      Thanks for popping along to my blog

      Ally :)

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  2. Ally 10 March 2014 at 10:19

    Ha! It was a sneaky palindrome :) Thanks for popping along to my blog

    Ally :)

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  3. Anonymous10 March 2014 at 10:25

    ooh, sneaky with a punch. great take. I don't know if I will be able to come up with something for this week's challenge.

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  4. Ally 10 March 2014 at 10:55

    I am being Mr Sneaky this week ;) Thanks

    Ally :)

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  5. Anonymous10 March 2014 at 12:05

    Ha. Nice. I'd actually rather like to see that on a bench. :)

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  6. Ally 10 March 2014 at 12:11

    Thanks :) It would be funny if somebody did it, I'm sure it would get in the local paper:)

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  7. kalpana solsi10 March 2014 at 12:31

    Pent-up feelings thrown up.

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  8. Ally 10 March 2014 at 13:57

    Yep, lots of pent up feelings ;)

    Thanks for popping along to my blog Kalpana :)

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  9. Thomas Charles MacInnes10 March 2014 at 18:07

    Thanks for sharing your good work with this community over the past while. I have enjoyed your creative and unique outlook on writing and life. Best of luck in the world beyond Trifecta. Btw, I used to have a cat named Bob so, this story resonates deep within my soul. Take care, Ally. :)

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  10. Ally 11 March 2014 at 02:27

    Thanks Tom :)

    I appreciate your comments and hopefully we Trifectans can keep in touch.

    I am a cat person too as well as a dog person.

    Ally :)

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  11. Wordifull Melanie11 March 2014 at 04:44

    HA! Nice one.

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  12. Atreyee11 March 2014 at 06:53

    Very creative and funny-enjoyed the idea ;-)

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  13. Anonymous11 March 2014 at 11:41

    Wicked! Dark humour at its best, Ally. I hope you achieve the (im)possible! :)

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    1. Ally 11 March 2014 at 13:46

      haha thanks Leigh :)

      the darker the humour the better

      Ally :)

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  14. Ally 11 March 2014 at 13:47

    Thanks Renada

    I know it would be hilarious, I think one day I should get one and stick it on a bench.

    Ally :)

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  15. Anonymous11 March 2014 at 23:34

    Very well crafted.

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    1. Ally 12 March 2014 at 01:51

      Thanks Yarnspinner:)

      That means a lot

      Ally :)

      @allyatherton

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  16. kymm12 March 2014 at 08:19

    Hahaha What a riot! Loved this, Ally.

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  17. Valerie Boersma12 March 2014 at 13:14

    I loved this too, Ally!

    There's a park bench memorial in a park near where I live that just says "In Memoriam" and then a whole lot of blank space...I always wonder who the clock is ticking away for...;)

    Keep in touch, ok? I still need a parrot;)

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    1. Ally 17 March 2014 at 05:57

      Thanks Valerie,

      And yes definitely keep in touch :)

      Ally

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  18. Anonymous12 March 2014 at 16:32

    Ha!
    Hate shared for all eternity. This made me laugh.

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  19. Unknown13 March 2014 at 10:37

    Well she certainly had the last word on that one! Ha!

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  20. Anonymous13 March 2014 at 11:22

    I recall that these things can take a while to organise. Did perhaps she know something in advance?

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    1. Ally 17 March 2014 at 05:58

      Yep

      I think she must have planned this ;)

      Ally

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  21. Unknown13 March 2014 at 19:06

    Haha! This piece is a full out assault. Straight to the point, and right to the gut. A voice doesn't get much more active and authoritative. Nice piece! Really enjoyed it.

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  22. Trifecta17 March 2014 at 03:50

    Please tell me this is true. :-) Thanks for linking up. I loved it.

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    1. Ally 17 March 2014 at 05:59

      Thank You

      If it's not, it should be


      Ally :)

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