Monday, 3 March 2014

Locked








                     Pearly gates or no pearly gates
                     God won't worm it out of me




                     He's supposed to be

                     omnipresent

                     he should know where I've hidden the keys








                    It's not my fault there's a backlog





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This is written for this week's Trifecta challenge.


You have to write a 33 word piece using the word prompt


WORM


using the third definition


 'to obtain or extract by artful or insidious questioning or by pleading,

asking or persuading'. Pop along and join in and connect with some lovely writers.






















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10 comments:

  1. Anonymous4 March 2014 at 04:28

    You got your hands on the proverbial "keys to the kingdom". I like it

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  2. Ally 4 March 2014 at 05:30

    Haha thanks tnkerr. Now what shall I do with them? ;)

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  3. Anonymous4 March 2014 at 09:37

    Seriously, why the need for confession?

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  4. Valerie Boersma4 March 2014 at 09:40

    I bet there's plenty of room in that OTHER place...

    Saucy little piece, Ally! I love it!

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  5. Anonymous4 March 2014 at 16:11

    Love the line - he's supposed to be omnipresent :) .

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  6. kymm4 March 2014 at 16:35

    Talk about a guilt trip!! Great piece.

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  7. shannon6 March 2014 at 10:20

    This is hilarious, very well done and thanks for the laugh.

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  8. Anonymous7 March 2014 at 16:29

    LOVE this! I'm picturing St. Peter on strike. Or maybe vacation. :)

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  9. Trifecta8 March 2014 at 19:36

    I love this. Backtalking the big guy. Nice job with the prompt.

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  10. Ally 10 March 2014 at 07:43

    Thanks for all your lovely comments :)

    Ally

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