Saturday, 19 March 2016
Unbearable ( Flash Fiction )
A red ticket is all you need for an erotic dream.
I made it to the front of the queue.
'Add a blue ticket and you can have double the pleasure.'
I handed over my blue ticket.
I couldn't wait to get home and for the day to draw to an end. The anticipation was unbearable. And then I saw her in the queue.
My wife. Head down clutching her red ticket.
What a bitch. Was I not good enough for her anymore?
And was that a green ticket I spotted in her left hand?
(C) Ally Atherton 2016
Written for the 100 word challenge over at Thin Spiral Notebook, hosted by Tara Roberts.
Take a look and join in. It's fun. This weeks word is 'Dream.'