Monday, 8 September 2014

Broken



                            
                     Image courtesy of Messi and taken from the Wiki Commons








It wasn't the monster under my bed I was worried about. It was the monsters inside my head and they were never a problem until the day they decided to escape.





Most people have nightmares but I think there's a switch or a circuit that keeps them from getting loose and mine is broken. I have a broken switch and my broken switch is responsible for so much crap in this world it would be better if I ended it right here and now.

I remember the first time it happened. One turned up at my school and killed two teachers and fifteen children. It was all over the news and there was nothing I could do but hide. That first one killed itself so my secret was safe but every time it happens I'm scared that my monsters will dob me in. They know where they have come from and I have to live with that and my fear that the police could turn up at my door at any hour.



I'm 43 now and my little monsters are everywhere. Over the years many of them have been imprisoned or executed and a few of them are still awaiting trial at the Hague. But I worry about the ones that have disappeared. The ones that are still out there. I turn on Sky News and they stare back at me with their blank, nightmare eyes. I open the newspaper and they fall out like adverts for shampoo or hair extensions.




But what scares me the most are the ones that are trying to get back inside. I hear them banging on my front door at night. I see their twisted faces through my window. They stand at the end of my bed at night and stare. But they can't get back in because the switch in my head is broken.






The switch is broken. Every morning they creep out but can't get back in. No matter how many times I pick them up and try to shove them back in. And for that I'm sorry. I'm so terrible sorry. Because I'm the reason your world is so fucked up and the reason why your monsters no longer stay under your bed but walk alongside you instead.






                                                    

                                                      (C) Ally Atherton 2014



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I wrote this for this Mondays Light & Shade Challenge. Please take a look and join in if you love to write, whether you are published or not.




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12 comments:

  1. Wow...just...wow. This was so...

    I am speechless. This was very intense.

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    1. Thank you Martha :) That means a lot


      Ally :)

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  2. very intense and powerful. The words held me in their grip!

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    1. Thank you Uma, your comments mean a lot

      Ally :)

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  3. That was very creative. I like the narrative style of how you told this story. It made it feel that much more real.

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  4. Beautifully crafted. A unique take on the prompt.

    Loved the idea of broken switch.

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  5. This was fun to read and an excellent use of BOTH prompts, which certainly impressed me:~)

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  6. Thanks Sara, I managed to fit both prompts in for once :)

    Ally :)

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  7. Very creative and interesting. You had 110% of my attention. This was great! Wonderful job!

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    1. Thanks Ashley, that means a lot :)

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