Monday, 10 March 2014

The Last Word










            Park bench memorials are everywhere



            these days



            but this bitch was quick I'll give her that much








            To my dead husband


           Rot in Hell you Bastard



           Bob 

          February 2014 



       


          That told him then.








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This was written for this week's Trifextra challenge over at Trifecta.


33 words are needed but they must include a word or a phrase that is a palindrome.


Why not have a go and say hi to some lovely writers.












36 comments:

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    1. I guess whatever he did, he should have treated her better :)

      Thanks for popping along to my blog

      Ally :)

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  2. Wow!! It was slipped in there so subtly hat I had to go back and find it lol. Great job!!

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    1. Ha! It was a sneaky palindrome :) Thanks for popping along to my blog

      Ally :)

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  3. ooh, sneaky with a punch. great take. I don't know if I will be able to come up with something for this week's challenge.

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  4. I am being Mr Sneaky this week ;) Thanks

    Ally :)

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  5. Ha. Nice. I'd actually rather like to see that on a bench. :)

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  6. Thanks :) It would be funny if somebody did it, I'm sure it would get in the local paper:)

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  7. Yep, lots of pent up feelings ;)

    Thanks for popping along to my blog Kalpana :)

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  8. Thanks for sharing your good work with this community over the past while. I have enjoyed your creative and unique outlook on writing and life. Best of luck in the world beyond Trifecta. Btw, I used to have a cat named Bob so, this story resonates deep within my soul. Take care, Ally. :)

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  9. Thanks Tom :)

    I appreciate your comments and hopefully we Trifectans can keep in touch.

    I am a cat person too as well as a dog person.

    Ally :)

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  10. Very creative and funny-enjoyed the idea ;-)

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  11. Wicked! Dark humour at its best, Ally. I hope you achieve the (im)possible! :)

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    1. haha thanks Leigh :)

      the darker the humour the better

      Ally :)

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  12. XD That is fantastic! I would die if I found a memorial like that. Haha.

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    1. Thanks Renada

      I know it would be hilarious, I think one day I should get one and stick it on a bench.

      Ally :)

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    1. Thanks Yarnspinner:)

      That means a lot

      Ally :)

      @allyatherton

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  14. Hahaha What a riot! Loved this, Ally.

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  15. I loved this too, Ally!

    There's a park bench memorial in a park near where I live that just says "In Memoriam" and then a whole lot of blank space...I always wonder who the clock is ticking away for...;)

    Keep in touch, ok? I still need a parrot;)

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    1. Thanks Valerie,

      And yes definitely keep in touch :)

      Ally

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  16. Ha!
    Hate shared for all eternity. This made me laugh.

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  17. Well she certainly had the last word on that one! Ha!

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    1. Didn't she just!

      Thanks Kathy :)

      Ally

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  18. I recall that these things can take a while to organise. Did perhaps she know something in advance?

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    1. Yep

      I think she must have planned this ;)

      Ally

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  19. Haha! This piece is a full out assault. Straight to the point, and right to the gut. A voice doesn't get much more active and authoritative. Nice piece! Really enjoyed it.

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  20. Please tell me this is true. :-) Thanks for linking up. I loved it.

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    1. Thank You

      If it's not, it should be


      Ally :)

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