Monday, 3 March 2014

Locked








                     Pearly gates or no pearly gates


                     God won't worm it out of me






                     He's supposed to be



                     omnipresent



                     he should know where I've hidden the keys








                    It's not my fault there's a backlog





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This is written for this week's Trifecta challenge.


You have to write a 33 word piece using the word prompt


WORM


using the third definition


 'to obtain or extract by artful or insidious questioning or by pleading,

asking or persuading'. Pop along and join in and connect with some lovely writers.






















11 comments:

  1. You got your hands on the proverbial "keys to the kingdom". I like it

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  2. Haha thanks tnkerr. Now what shall I do with them? ;)

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  3. Seriously, why the need for confession?

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  4. I bet there's plenty of room in that OTHER place...

    Saucy little piece, Ally! I love it!

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  5. Absolutely love this piece. In whole, all of it, I can't needle out a particular word or line. (:

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  6. Love the line - he's supposed to be omnipresent :) .

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  7. Talk about a guilt trip!! Great piece.

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  8. This is hilarious, very well done and thanks for the laugh.

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  9. LOVE this! I'm picturing St. Peter on strike. Or maybe vacation. :)

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  10. I love this. Backtalking the big guy. Nice job with the prompt.

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  11. Thanks for all your lovely comments :)

    Ally

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